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Evaluation Station II

The fifteen-mark evaluation on Text 2. Judging how well a non-fiction writer does something is not the same as agreeing with them, and the difference is worth most of the marks.

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Fifteen marks on Text 2 ⭐

Question 6 gives you a **critical statement** about a specified part of Text 2 and asks how far you agree. It is worth **15 marks** and tests **AO4**, evaluation. You have met this question before on Component 1, on a fiction extract. Component 2 is different in one way that changes everything: **the writer is a real person making a real point.** That opens a trap the fiction paper cannot set, and the next card is that trap.

Judge the writing, not the argument ⚖️

On a non-fiction text you will have an opinion about what the writer says. **That opinion is worth nothing here.** The question never asks whether the writer is right. It asks how far you agree that the writer **does something successfully**: conveys a feeling, persuades a reader, makes a place vivid. **"I disagree, libraries should be modernised"** answers a question nobody asked. **"The writer conveys the loss more convincingly in the second half, because..."** is the same student, ten marks better off.

Where is the work being done? ✍️

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Which one is evaluating? ❓

All four sentences below are about that extract. Which one is actually evaluating?

  • The understatement of "could not make my face do the right thing" conveys the loss more powerfully than a complaint would, because the reader is left to supply the feeling
  • The writer goes back to the library and finds it has been painted yellow
  • The writer uses a simile, "like a slice of cake nobody ordered"
  • I agree with the writer, because old libraries are better than modern ones

Two ways to start a sentence ↔️

The difference between a grade 4 and a grade 8 answer is often visible in the first six words of each paragraph.

Where does he give ground? 🤝

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Rank these answers 🪜

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What makes a strong Q6 answer? ✅

Select the TWO things that would strengthen an evaluation answer.

  • Finding a moment in the text that complicates the statement, and saying so
  • Explaining the effect a method has on the reader, not just naming the method
  • Ranging across the whole of Text 2 rather than the specified part
  • Agreeing fully with the statement, so the answer stays consistent

Plan it 🧭

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Sentences that carry a judgement 🗂️

Keep these in your head. Each one forces you to evaluate rather than describe, because none of them can be finished without a reason:

Order one paragraph 🧱

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The summary 📝

Question 6 is worth _____ marks and tests _____. You evaluate a specified part of Text 2, which means making a _____ about how well the writer does something rather than describing what they did. Every point needs a short _____ from that part of the text. And the marks are for judging the _____, never for agreeing with the writer's opinion.

15 AO4 judgement quotation writing 14 AO2 summary

Write the answer 📄

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